Se7en Dreams

Rookie-detective Satan (Amlan!) seeks a 7-Sins (Christian-fable) killer with a 'dark message' in the city-rain, hoping to yield special distance(s).

A brooding fanfiction of Se7en (David Fincher). Enjoy, 

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The city was heavy with rain that cold season on Earth, and rookie-detective Amlan Satan was on the trail of a nefarious serial-killer with a death-message about the 7-Sins (Christianity). The killer was claiming he'd been using a movie-themed 'chess-set' to frame crime(s) targeting special individuals who'd been 'primed' as Apocalypse 'diplomats' of man's downfall from Paradise, and wary Satan (Amlan) had become somewhat weary of this tone of urban darkness.

KILLER (Unknown): Follow me, Detective Satan, on this city-trail to Hell, for each chess-piece movement is like a bad movie.

Unfortunately, during this Coronavirus time on Earth, Detective Satan had to be certain and feel himself as a hygiene-man and himself was a 'masked' walking-man hunting for this Killer, and he hoped to send special cyber-message(s) regarding the spiritual accessibility on social-media of just about anyone who'd want/wish to feel like they'd been 'participant-observers' in this planetary-climate of 'bad' feeling(s).

DIARY: If this 'Killer' really wants to send city-folk to Purgatory through a message about 7-Sins downfall, he's got a pattern.

Well, he found the pattern after the Killer claimed his 5th victim, on the track to complete his 7-murder 'masterpiece' in the rainy city of darkness. The killer had stopped in an alley-residential area of the city where a drug-dealer was living, known to be peddling narcotics to high-school athletes, and Satan (Amlan) realized this sin-target from Christian fable was about the sin of sloth, and he immediately recognized that the following-crime of 7-Sins would be one of the sin of wrath, perhaps targeting a city-official rumored to be corrupt and cruel and intercepted the murder before it happened, leading to a final arrest!

KILLER: Don't you realize this 'crusade' I'd carry-out was one of social-media value(s), Satan?
AMLAN: Sure, sure; this was ironically a 'method' for madness, but the victims hail you as a prophet of doom, eh?
KILLER: Don't underestimate the sullying of the human factor in the city of Earth, Satan!
AMLAN: Sure, sure; you'll die in prison or worse, and hopefully we'll pray for the casualties of your private 'war' against IQ.

KILLER: It was a stalemate-condition(s) chess-match, Amlan.

AMLAN: Call me Satan...no, sir...it was a mission of mercy forgotten, and the city will remember the prayer(s)...not folly.

KILLER: Maybe!

Detective Satan decided to visit the tombstone of one of the victims of the 7-Killer and laid flowers and poured some drink onto the field, and he whispered to himself, "Earth has its own chess-prayer(s), and these crimes will be remembered for the casualties of fallen worlds, and hopefully not forgotten distance(s)!"

DIARY: All this heroics tells me what I really need now as a 'detective-man' of the rainy city is a life of romanticism (maybe).

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"Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes)

Reviews

[Samotar]

It is hard to review someone so young, and so wrong. First, choose only one or three online public property photo sites, they exist. Then choose carefully, deciding about where, for what, the color, the theme, and so on. What you have published instead is a hodgepodge of uncritical choices. Not palatable at all. And, could you form your text into a bit of coherence, as it is, it is not. The use of the dialogs needs additional studying at least. All in all, something not to be repeated, if you can...