Orange-State Phantoms {The Shining}

Orange-State Phantoms {The Shining}

A Story by Abishai100
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Adaptation ('fanfiction') of Kubrick's adaptation (cinema) of Stephen King's hotel-hauntings/domesticated-sanity tale...concerning a sports-themed writer who comes-undone with his (own) telepathy.

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An adaptation of Kubrick's searing look into the shaping of the psyche, brought on by superstitions of the dark-side of the universe, The Shining (Stephen King), which I hope you'll like (and thanks so much for reading!), 
DISCLAIMER: This work of 'fanfiction' offers no ties to the referenced film of inspiration and is therefore cast as purely a 'personal' expression of social theater (for 'open' reviews). 

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MR. AMLAN SATAN: "My summer-stay at a Miami 'hostel' is a haven for writer's view(s), friend."
PUBLISHER: It's what you need, Satan...post-divorce...your great work on unrequited daydreams!
SATAN: Perchance this finds me in an age of Reason, for in-house walled image for sports, friend.
PUBLISHER: It's what you need, Satan...post-divorce...your conceived-IQ of a failed athlete (USA).
SATAN: Perchance I find that summertime note of why superstitions cast 'doubt' for immortality, ha.
PUBLISHER: Good luck, Facebook-like.



Amlan Satan put-aside his youthful-fancy that his lifelong pursuit of athletics-hobbies, with certain pronounced excellence(s), in varied arenas, including tennis, hockey, soccer, cross-country, and fencing made him a future Olympian, but he never made it, cripped after an accident, forcing him to indulge in his one-other hobby on Earth...writing. He decided to move himself to an Orange-State 'hostel' (Wingate), where he'd find room-inspiration to 'chess-tie' superstitions of American Dream vanities with isolationist-meditation, but he never disclosed his dark-secret...his 'uncanny' ability to sense the presence of ghosts (not Facebook-like).



CONCIERGE: We're so eager for your 'hostel'-stay here, sir, in Miami, as you can see our comforts.
SATAN: Thanx, Charlie, friend; I've found a wonderwall-arena for this sports-daydream work.
CONCIERGE: Have you titled it, sir (if we may ask)?
SATAN: I think so, Charlie...it's gonna be called The Future Hostel (ha).
CONCIERGE: Sounds grand ('Facebook-like').
SATAN: Thanx, for everything.



STORY_EXCERPT: "Chapter 2 (The Lost Coaching)...Amlan looked to his memory of being coached, and why he always preferred to 'chess-tie' education in fitness/athletics in the Western 'worldly' incomplete-distances readings of life-drawn bureaucracy-confidence which he insisted would make him 'fantastic' for media-diplomacy once he reached celebrity; but he feared every time, while young, he departed from a given arena/sport/coach/field, he'd encounter the haunting ghosts of this memory of lost coaching...for the Ego."



SATAN: I'm not lying, you fool!
CONCIERGE: Good-friend, I shan't indulge your now-unwinding 'psychic' view of ghosts.
SATAN: This darned 'hostel' is filled to the bucket(s) with teeming phantoms of Hell!
CONCIERGE: Mr. Satan...this is a Miami 'institution'...convenience (airport) for guests for normalcy.
SATAN: These damned phantoms insist each represent some lost dream of a sport that eluded me.
CONCIERGE: Me thinks you've translated some ghost-IQ for your own (writing) into made fantasy.
SATAN: When I vanish (from Earth), you tell my publisher (Freddy Rogers) that this was Facebook-like.
CONCIERGE: Thanx (bureaucracy-art).



Mr. Amlan Satan vanished from Earth, and no one knew the reason, and his publisher (Mr. Rogers) was furious, convinced his 'hostel-station' staff was poorly-responsible for celebrity-communications. For some (unknown) reason, Amlan threw a sports-doll from his high-level suite-window down to the 'hostel' (Wingate) summer-pool; and he left some 'notation-items' behind (alongside his notes/scribbles of his unfinished novel about sports-daydreams forever lost --- The Future Hostel).



PUBLISHER: I demand to know the meaning of this vanishing.
DETECTIVE: We're simply doubtful any clue surfaces, Freddy!
PUBLISHER: Why this Super Bowl football card trophy left-behind?
DETECTIVE: We've an ('insider') joke, he's 'melded' with the dark-side of Orange-State Phantoms!
PUBLISHER: I hope you're (incompletely) close.
DETECTIVE: He was a great writer.
PUBLISHER: We know (thanx)...Facebook-like.



CONCIERGE: He left items; notes/recipes; (Indian) luchi-bread thanksgiving-diner plate chat(s).
INTERVIEW: Anything else (for Orange-State distances)?
CONCIERGE: Something about Upper-Deck trophy-fantasy (football-card 'field goals').
INTERVIEW: Why this hospitality-reading?
CONCIERGE: Perchance he was satisfied, we think, friend.
INTERVIEW: Thanx, Charlie...for everything.



Why'd Satan vanish (from the 'fare-rich' Earth)? What would his novel have revealed about incomplete-distances readings to the lost art of the American Dreams? Why'd he leave-behind lifestyle poignant items for value(s) in his 'hostel' (Wingate) suite, including a vigilantism-youth avatar (DC) doodle (for the Ego)? Did his Miami-phantoms 'encounters' drawn from his (secret/undisclosed telepathy) draw him to the other-side of the (known) universe, of immortality-IQ? We'll never know, but we do know that this was a 'shining' portrait of the lines bonding darkness...with superstitions-dialysis (for sports or 'American' doctorates).



"Doing well is the result of doing good. That's what capitalism is all about" (Ralph Waldo Emerson). 

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"Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes)

© 2024 Abishai100


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