Hammurabi's Phonon

Hammurabi's Phonon

A Story by Abishai100
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A tale of (incomplete) inventions in (American Homeland) bureaucracy-arts for crime/psychology and citizenry-Selfie passions for transit bread superstition.

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A feature/fiction about the Code of Hammurabi, inspired by Se7en (David Fincher), which I think you'll like (and thanks for reading!), 
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Amlan and Marcus, private-detectives, were assigned to a lethal Orange-State case involving a serial-stalker who took photos of pedestrians/tourists and made (anonymous!) social-media re-presentations of their (imagined) moral frailty for sentences/languages concerning their will (and ability) to cast doubt about the culpability of accused criminals, a first-level precept in that iconic punitive/authoritarian ancient-world law-tablet called the Code of Hammurabi. Amlan and Marcus identified this (anonymous) sociopath with a special alias ('John Doe') and referenced Selfie-traffic culture for incomplete-lines readings of life 'linked' crime/psychology books (for the Ego!).



JOHN DOE: You doubt my integrity, heroes?
AMLAN/MARCUS: Seems you've put a new (American) Homeland spin on furies.
JOHN DOE: There's hospitality-lines for (incomplete) bureaucracy-arts, heroes!
AMLAN/MARCUS: Citing random Orange-State citizenry as crime-IQ frail, Doe?
JOHN DOE: Think it, heroes; you're served Chinese-soup but fail in quality-ID.
AMLAN/MARCUS: Some identification 'mark' for consumerism/traffic brains, Doe?
JOHN DOE: Think it, pals; "Orange-State resident fails to ID person in crime-stat."
AMLAN/MARCUS: Anti-American Hammurabi sound-particles (phonons) for Hell!
JOHN DOE: Well, seems I've created some ire for furies in Chinatown-lore (ha).
AMLAN/MARCUS: Leviathan...hospitality's dodecahedrons (damn).



Wow, our two protagonist 'prince' detectives of the (American) Homeland, Amlan/Marcus, made quite the 'pronounced' (and public!) social-media culture (cyber) language-arts reading for stand(s) in challenge to the serial-stalker's antisocial Orange-State clams that citizenry 'marks' for crime/psychology ID-intelligence would reveal a special transit/pedestrian 'frailty' for the brains of mod-Earthling self-consciousness defenses for securities in a 21st-Century 'world' of incomplete-lines to Selfie-magic for tourism...and dialysis (wow).



AMLAN: What should we do now?
MARCUS: Adapt the trumpet-laurel into some Pulitzer-caliber work, pal.
AMLAN: We'll title the 'deed' American Psychosis: Hammurabi's Phonon (sure).
MARCUS: Sounds-dialysis; Doe's plan was to create 'scar-face' image (acid-chess).
AMLAN: He was a Devil's Advocate for Orange-State superstitions (Selfie-hate).
MARCUS: Perchance he wanted us (all) to see some 'line' for dictionaries.



'JOHN-DOE': "I wanted this whole-Earth to 'witness' what I'd ID'd as special language-lines for psychology-filing's incomplete process (for the Ego)...to just think that a citizen would be 'frail' to assign due-doubt/condemnation of an accused individual/passerby/citizen would be to reveal a dark light image of consumerism/sports/media culture for its (varied) 'trophies' and bread/fruit premonitions of (simplified) dogma for dowries (damn!)."



"Doing well is the result of doing good. That's what capitalism is all about" (Ralph Waldo Emerson). 

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"Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes)

© 2024 Abishai100


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