Doubt: War-Field Shoulder {Afghan-War Comic}

Comic art oriented telepathy/telekinesis drama of differences in soldier-choice for wrought American Homeland post-writes about the Earth-realm intuition of simplified ethics.

Comics arts genre oriented psychokinetics fiction. Happy Summer (thanks for reading), 

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Mr. Amlan Satan had become proud of his service as an active soldier in the Afghan-war in the post-9/11 era American quest for restorations in petrol-politics capitalism for 21st-Century emerging Selfie commerce-life global culture for economics driven socialized rhetoric of peace and jars of diplomacy but kept his secret psychic-powers of super-human ability to himself, even after returning to the States safely post-service for continuity in patriot-acts with cyber-blogs about the 'IQ' behind mod-Earthling harvest-finances 'linked' Western (American!) sensibilities of human realm festivities/mythology/superstition/democracy (ok).

However, he now had a 2nd-secret to keep to himself; and it concerned an active female soldier he met during service in that Afghan post-9/11 American force-engagement for petrol-politics sanitation for continuity in new Earth diplomacy 'things.' This secret concerned Shelbye, a woman serving as a female American soldier in that challenging war-environment, who also exhibited psyche-powers of the super-human description, but not mere telepathy but also telekinesis. Telepaths, like Amlan, could sense the topological thoughts of other minds; but telekinetically-powered beings could literally move objects in space with the force of mental-wave and intuition (damn). Amlan was reserved/conservative on battlefield-space with his telepathy, preferring moderate/modest enemy-fire premonitions for quick-reflex defense combat for godly fears. Shelbye, however, used half-invisible telekinesis to warp the fire, aim, and handguns of enemy soldiers in Afghanistan (for Hell). Amlan kept this 9/11 psyche-power secret 'shape' a (dark secret)...Facebook-like.

SHELBYE: Happy Halloween, fool.

AMLAN SATAN: Hey, I've become an avid-fan of my Miroslav Satan hockey-card.

SHELBYE: Fan-gear for social media culture post-return for Selfie-USA, eh?

AMLAN SATAN: I recount our division of views for psyche-power on war's field, girl.

SHELBYE: You're more good, Mister Satan...I'm the dark-side variety, you say evil?

AMLAN SATAN: We're night-and-day, Shelbye...and I'm writing a novel about us.

SHELBYE: Keep me unidentified, fool; but I dare say you should include hockey.

AMLAN SATAN: I shall...a small margin consciousness about hockey-coach religion.

SHELBYE: Fan of The Dirty Dozen, fool?

AMLAN SATAN: You're dangerous (comic book like!).

STORY_EXCERPTS(Mr. Amlan Satan): "Arrows of time making for differentials of Heaven between Hell may indicate the wiseness of use of psychic powers, for those who can sense thoughts and those also who can move objects for universal fears...for the prince of telepathy who remained honest to capitalism's softer-faces of self-defense, fighting invoked reservations of pure hospitality protection/fencing for future fried-chicken humility for God...for the dark-princess of telekinesis who experimented 'liberally' with a scale of American prowess for speedy resolution of a disastrous war-cleat (e.g., 9/11, etc.), manipulating potential energy of Hell had become an interest subject for any story of capitalism's superhuman/dark-magic/interceptions variety (for the Ego)."

WIFE: You're a good ice-hockey coach, Amlan Satan (ok).

AMLAN: Well...the spirit of work was infused to my praised story, ok!

WIFE: Forget the war, and everyone you'll forget will be in Heaven, hubby.

AMLAN: Facebook-like (for doubt).

"Doing well is the result of doing good. That's what capitalism is all about" (Ralph Waldo Emerson). 

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"Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes)

Reviews

[Jacqueline]

I read your story and I really liked it. You have written a very good story. I really liked the setting of the story, and i have many specific ideas for your next story. Feel free to message me on Discord, jacquelineparson