The Dark Room: Ice & Shoe/Box

The Dark Room: Ice & Shoe/Box

A Story by Abishai100
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Photo-culture evolution premonition-like fiction tale of a good/evil twin pair with some modest 'rivalry-hyperbole' language for stalker/defender fence at the Winter Games.

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Stalker/sibling tale/fiction. Thanks for reading (Happy Summer!), 
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Mr. Amlan Satan was concerned when his evil-twin (brother!) Ajay showed up just ahead of the Calgary Winter Games, while he prepped a 'cool' cheer of his fave-Euro ice-skater angel-deity, seeking some social writing for her (anticipated!) gold win for TV-culture commentary (ok).



AJAY: You've always been the more American, sane, cheerful, and gentleman.
AMLAN: I've some antonyms from memory of high-school exam verbal-study, ok.
AJAY: Yeah, I'm the more punk, liberal, weird, anarchic, musical, fanatical, ha.
AMLAN: What's the deal with our ('shared') image of fave-ice angel for cheer?
AJAY: I'm taking you to Canada; and I'm gonna stalk her, my goodly-twin/bro!
AMLAN: What?
AJAY: The only way to stop me is if you stalk her, separately, too, ok?
AMLAN: What?
AJAY: It's your choice, brother...lest I make a Hell's stink for future social study.
AMLAN: I get it...so in like 40yrs, social culture sees twins talking this gossip?
AJAY: Sure, over phones, for Halloween, for TV-celebrity stalking language.
AMLAN: What?



What could Amlan Satan, Slovak-Algerian ice-fan do (now)? He had no choice but to take the game-proposal made by his evil-twin (Ajay) and zoomed to Canada (with him) and scrambled from their separate motel-rooms in a Winter Games race to get to the celebrity-champion before he did; and of course, the good twin sought to just get to her to warn her and help her evade the evil sibling. However, if he failed, Ajay would make Hell, and Amlan had to draw on some 'natural' sibling-rivalry to draw some physical brain-speed (from boyhood year memory!) and managed triumphantly to get to her first (for TV-professionalism and 'hyperbole').



AJAY: Damn you.
AMLAN: Let's get some (original) chicken, evil brother.
AJAY: Damn you.
AMLAN: We'll get you criminal-insanity therapy post-rest, brother.
AJAY: Damn you.
AMLAN: Who'd think our (shared?) fave-ice deity liked fried chicken (like us)?
AJAY: Damn you.
AMLAN: Lithium's keratin...face-like.



"Doing well is the result of doing good. That's what capitalism is all about" (Ralph Waldo Emerson). 

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"Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes)

© 2025 Abishai100


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