Ice-Margin: Satan's Oxygen {Part-II}

Ice-Margin: Satan's Oxygen {Part-II}

A Story by Abishai100
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The Devil poses challenge to a blog-prince of ice-hockey (coaching) and violence-kitchens for an Earth-juxtaposition of things 'kamikaze' and sets him on a quill--mission to 'outline' kilns.

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Fight Club (David Fincher) inspired ice-hockey 'consciousness' fiction. Happy end-of-Summer, all 


DISCLAIMER: This work of creative fiction contains images/references with no ties to any person(s)/body (e.g., NHL) and is (therefore) cast as purely a 'personal' expression for social art (for 'open' views/translations).

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Well, the Devil had charged a challenge-game of some nifty cleverness to see if a 'cool' prince of ice-hockey coaching in Boston-town, Mr. Amlan Satan (Slovak-Algerian American Catholic) would find needed lines of social media culture 'friendly' intelligence-quotients for casting proper psyche-readings of the potential energy of violence knowledge for the game of ice-hockey, since Mr. Satan (Amlan) had become a respected coach in a junior-league. Amlan had found good language for the 1st-portion of the 'examination' storyboard for hockey and anarchism and was now seeking Rationalism for the next-part...and the Devil waited (Selfie-like).



MR. AMLAN SATAN: Well, I think this success-rating has me freed from your siren!
DEVIL: Your words of shape of anarchy (violence!) in ice-hockey makes her angel.
MR. AMLAN SATAN: That's God's game-challenge for me, Devil...anarchy for faith?
DEVIL: Life is chance, and your work's game-IQ, Mr. Satan...complete the task.
MR. AMLAN SATAN: This siren I've cast as part of my universe is fan-imagery, eh?
DEVIL: Facebook-like (for doubt).



STORY_EXCERPT: "The modes of image for the shape of undeniable violence in an otherwise icy-skate(s) game of incomplete-arts of swift-balance for shooting and passing and defense with long thin sticks in the Western world of great competition windows/fanfare and cast the protagonist-prince of coaching, of 'subjectivity' consciousness, as a metaphysics half-Christian messenger of things of controlled fury and fast-wit(s) for Heaven/Hell...and maybe the outcomes known for this 'game' of wills and Selfie-controls revealed to the prince of coaching why fates of athletes required 'education' for violence by kinship!"



DEVIL: Your words have shape and flow-construct for unpredictability, Earth-man.
MR. AMLAN SATAN: Thanx, I guess.
DEVIL: You instill in your junior-league athletes special word of prep for Hell!
MR. AMLAN SATAN: Thanx...I believe it.
DEVIL: So what're you discovering about my debate with God, Earth-man (eh)?
MR. AMLAN SATAN: I'm some kind of business-message 'prince' of Selfie-fashion.
DEVIL: Your game is one of frailty; you preside over ambition; test is counsel.
MR. AMLAN SATAN: A counselor may offer something about the danger of envy?
DEVIL: That's the idea, and should you complete the task, I'll remove my siren.
MR. AMLAN SATAN: Thanx, I'm sure (Facebook-like).



So, the Devil did have Mr. Amlan Satan, our protagonist 'prince' of hockey word(s), find right-adjective stuff for re-presentation of violence-premonition for his coached icy game of balances/fitness/speed; and Amlan proceeded to craft his special cyber-culture language-tell of what made his counsel-position for his junior-athletes chance-intelligence for things of anarchy-prep for sanity...and spiritualism (for psychiatry!). Amlan now looked to his final part of this Devil-examination as time passed; and he hoped the 'siren' (fallen angel calendar-model female of ice-hockey 'static') the Devil placed for challenge/position/music would be (someday) replaced by a kinder waitress who'd tell Amlan about the simple/soft things...of kilns (hmmm).



"Doing well is the result of doing good. That's what capitalism is all about" (Ralph Waldo Emerson). 

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"Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes)

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