Elsewhere: HeorotA Story by Abishai100A hockey coach and creative writer is transported to an 'elsewhere-realm' of pirates of unknown depths and seeks to adapt the 'revelation' into intelligence words.
A pirates/haunting vignette. Thanks for reading,
---- ==== "I was considering writing a special story about modern Earth fascination with pirates, despite the evolution of storytelling geared more towards Realism and inner-city 'troubles' like colors of gangs and urbanization capitalism complexity theories and even spy-games of new age relevance becoming more 'sanity-hype' language for the modern storyteller/writer. I found this interest in 'classic' sea-matrix eccentricity imagery maybe because I'd become a Boston-town junior-hockey league coach for special teamwork-spirits 'electricity' for the Ego. I set-about to derive a tale of incomplete-arts of time-traveling pirates of old-Earth's sea venturing into our post-9/11 era American Homeland shores with special messages of haunting and treasure-insurance smiles and sneers for things of social-media keratin (Facebook-like!)." ![]() "After I started composing this 'dashing' modernized 'consciousness-spin' on the (timeless?) appeal of the Earth's sea-pirate, for haunting and linguistics, I found myself plunged into a dark-dream vision during sleep, after some nice Friday's Eve wine (too much perhaps). I was hauled-away in a tornado and into a darker dimension in which very sinister/mischievous pirates, with a rather bloody-murder qualia-like speediness in sword-use and decapitation intuition and wondered if the tornado that swept me there was some omen-physics of what made my pirates-lore write a thing of unanticipated/unanalyzed/undetected knucklebones (of Hell!)." ![]() SCAR: Welcome to a dominion of depth, fool (har-har-har). ME: I guess I'd be writing about a bad-fellow as you are, pirate! SCAR: They calls me Scar, for I detest your modern sanity of cars (har-har-har). ME: You make sarcasm of my words of pirate-campfire sense, for story-tell. SCAR: The pirate is an adventure-spirit, sure...but with bloody-murder for war. ME: War? SCAR: Fool-writer, you know not of the reach of arm of a pirate's identity. ME: Identity? SCAR: The pirate is a fallen-angel, you see...and the only known art is of funnies. ME: Funny? SCAR: Yes, fool-writer; I am Scar, your tour-guide, in a world of pirates (fallen-angels). ME: This is religion. SCAR: It be not...it be knucklebones (for your Facebook-like). ME: Wow (Selfie-like). ![]() "When I woke from the dark-dream vision post-sleep and wine, I was in cold-sweat and decided each and every omen absorbed was somehow some proximity to some real/undeniable/undoubted truth, even if half-unknown to the writer, dreamer, or psychic! I decided to pen a very-special adaptation-tale, in which I'd disclose a (deep) revelation of my own. You see, a while ago, while traveling in Brussels for Xmas for a children's toy-drive/distribution activity for my hockey-group in Boston-town, I was told by my fortune-teller and palm-reader that I'd always had this 'nag' suspicion that I was somehow a real telepath, a deep-psychic, but had decided to keep this weird-secret to myself. Now, I realized this fortune was true, and I decided to harness all its features of Selfie-IQ in my brain to weave into my pirate-adaptation story, wrought from that tornado-dream, to include a very-special toy-rifle my uncle (Buck) gave me when I was young (ha)." ![]() STORY_EXCERPT: The normal affable prince of hockey in New England knew only of what was told/relayed in text and literature/campfire format(s) for the arena of human-universe know...that the pirate was an eccentric adventurer and looter was known, but that the pirate was (also/equally!) a psychic and blood-hunter and murder-messenger was lesser-known for words of fiction or fantasy or fact...and the prince, himself a psychic/telepath, somehow felt closer to the seas of old/new, thinking the pirates of the sea, and their ghosts-of-hell or abominations, had somehow tracked him to his own realm of Earth, in a modern 'environment' for a Selfie-kitchen (har-har-har). ![]() WAITRESS: Here's your chicken-pie, sir. ME: Thanx (a lot). WAITRESS: You got some pirate-books from the BPL, sir? ME: Boston Public Library...so great (no?). WAITRESS: What's this napkin scribble of blood-drippings, sir? ME: I'm working on my adaptation-write of a dream-vision (Heorot). WAITRESS: Heorot, sir? ME: The name of a pirate-ship come into our-time from the past-sea. WAITRESS: Heorot, sir? ME: A word...a term...signifying language-distance to know. WAITRESS: That's Boston-town, then (ha)...good lemon. ME: Thanx (a lot). ![]() "So, I set-about to adapt my dream-vision into a modernized and classic language hybridized tale of pirates of a deeper-Hell than the one known, and in this dominion of time-travel and psychic-powers of great eccentricity, or even deformity, I 'crowned' a marshal-monarch of these darker and more bizarre pirates of the universe and named him Dartmouth, leader of Heorot, and likened to our modern-world comic art design of things...onside." ![]() STORY-DIALOGUE EXCERPTS: DARTMOUTH: Har, me knows this hot-meat dog is one of Earth, damn. WITNESS: You're pure evil, and so's Heorot (your vessel). DARTMOUTH: Be wary, for this time of our bloody-murder language is near. WITNESS: You're worse than ghosts, damn. DARTMOUTH: Ghosts are ink...pirates are inventors (har-har-har). WITNESS: Damn! ![]() "Doing well is the result of doing good. That's what capitalism is all about" (Ralph Waldo Emerson). ==== "Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes) © 2025 Abishai100 |
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Added on September 2, 2025 Last Updated on September 2, 2025 AuthorAbishai100NJAboutStudent/Minister; Hobbies: Comic Books, Culinary Arts, Music; Religion: Catholic; Education: Dartmouth College more.. |









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