Hallways Rating

Hallways Rating

A Story by Abishai100
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Man and woman are invisibly apart in a new age Earth of things of life and espionage blended beneath layers of capitalism's (inventive) IQ-quilts.

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A world customs/intrigue fiction. Happy March (thanks for reading!), 
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Two individuals having intersections in path compose our little dark tale here about incomplete-distances of normal life and underground deformed life for things of new-century Earth consumerism/video life and inventions in black market seizure guerrilla warfare for diamonds/terrorism for comment/hyperbole (Facebook-like).



AMLAN: I'll be in this section of the tour looking at English politicians imagery!
DANICA: I'll be in this other sector surveying the jewelry brought in for school.
AMLAN: Do you know anything of this gossiped gem-runner warrior (terrorism)?
DANICA: Hey, I know nothing of that mysterious woman, hubby; you do your art.
AMLAN: No, I didn't mean you did, but I'm oddly shocked you're so unnerved.
DANICA: I'm not that girl, babe...and you need focus on your own art-study here.
AMLAN: Sure (Facebook-like).



DETECTIVE CHARLES: You'd no clue your wife had an acid-gun on her person?
AMLAN: We were on vacation and read of that gem-warrior and I knew nothing!
DETECTIVE CHARLES: You did not know Danica was that very-same warrior, sir?
AMLAN: Look, she's vanished after splashing the museum jewelry with acid, right?
DETECTIVE CHARLES: You were in the other sector of the tour surveying politics!
AMLAN: That I was, and I'd like to put this customs-hallways run-nightmare away.
DETECTIVE CHARLES: Sorry for your angst and troubles here, sir (farewell).



Amlan never got over the fact that his darling-bride (Danica) vanished, perhaps infused into the new-century Earth 'underground' of things of eco-vigilance warfare for black market seizures, terrorism 'troubles' of doubt, and rogue finance/motions eyes; and he remembered that day in the tour while on vacation during which darling-Danica flew to her new-life of wars/ninja-arts as inspiration for his new page in Earth-realm life...making photography-artworks of capitalist machinery for quiz-show (wow).



"Doing well is the result of doing good. That's what capitalism is all about" (Ralph Waldo Emerson). 

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"Money is everything" (Ecclesiastes)

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