Scorned

And for those he hates,
For those she scorns,
He takes to the thorns!
Drawing on their lives!

As a Warlock I say,
As a Witch I might be,
That he is a shadow, through-and-through.
Coveted by morning,
Respected by night.

Reviews

[Vin]

Short, sharp and Bang on. You are one of a kind! Keep going

[L J]

I like short and precise, and I like your honesty

[Franco]

I liked it. The style of poetry reminds me of an old poem book I read years ago called "The Coveted goddess." The book was a series of poems some of which are of a similar style to this poem. The eerie-esk nature of these style of poems always catch my attention. Well done.

[Relic]

This is intriguing and full of darkness but also seems to underlie a tradition long held.

Good poem. Welcome to WC.

[AbsintheandBlood]

Thank you. Poetry is a passion of mine

[Relic]

It certainly allows us to say on paper what can't be or won't be said in other situations I guess.