Call Me a Liar

I was angry at a so-called "friend." She told me something that I relayed to one of her "friends" and she had the audacity to call ME a liar. Piece of s**t....

Run a knife against your head,
If you’re lucky, you will be dead.
Otherwise, you’ll live with the deformities
Instead of laying among the many dead bodies.

Call me a liar, shut the f**k up!
I’m not a liar, and you’re going to be cutup.
With that one sentence, you pissed off my demons.
Be ready to die, you’re not better than the other hypocritical Christians.

As your body hangs lifeless from the ceiling like a chandelier,
In hell, where you’re going, is where you’ll fear
My very existence showing up at any point in time,
Anyone who calls me a liar, doesn’t live past their prime.

Reviews

[Jenny Nelson]

Quite a bit of anger here, but then betrayal tends to do that to a person. You certainly did a good job of getting your point and your feel across. And while I don't argue that there are more than plenty of "hypocritical Christians" out there, please keep in mind, no one is perfect no matter what they profess to be or not be, and there are some pretty decent folks out there that "claim the name" of Jesus Christ." I understand where you're coming from; I've been badly hurt by well intending Christians myself, still to this day sitting here thinking "what the heck" about it, but forgiveness is quite beneficial to you; moreso than anger. Don't mess yourself up over someone who has no consideration for you. It should be their loss and not yours. Hope this works out for you, but writing is theraputic and I hope it helped. You do have a talent for for getting a point across.