Shrouded summit

Heaving, blurring pit less current 

I cannot elude the scourge

Everyday is hung in grey

I am disappearing. 

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Reviews

[Frontier]

This is dark, seems like the speaker has lost hope. Short but effective.

[Wraith.]

Indeed, thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like the question mark for the last line...that grey hangs so thick i cannot see the summit...and i get farther and farther away from it and further into the grey that will take me completely away.

[Wraith.]

Ah, just seen this, yes :)