Austere

Sculpting flesh 

Evade any excess 

Shedding skin

Purge from within

far beyond

this human world

Ignorance, repugnant 

Withdrawal

Reverence

Dissolving into a different 

frame of mind

Transcending though space

black and time

Lost somewhere within

the womb of death

the tomb of life 

Reviews

[Apollos]

Austere is just essentially Austin lol

“Sculping flesh
Evade any excess”

Really liked that couplet 👌🏻

[Tks]

The ending was woven very nicely..the contradictory use of "the womb of death, the tomb of life". Your writing operates on many complex levels, and anyone who reads them, I feel, is able to relate to your writing quite easily due to its universal elements.