Sunshine

Luminous sunflowers and mustard skies 

the sink overflowed 

collecting the flies

scraps of porclain

Our lord has turned insane

Reviews

[Alessander]

Like it. Very tactile. Visual.
very yellow opening.
It almost feels like a still life to me in its economy and simplicity.


The last line kinda through me for a loop, but I like the contrast of sunflower, skies and sink, flies. From the grandeur to the mundane. Also appreciate the subtle off-rhyme of porcelain" and "insane".

[Wraith.]

Lovely review. Thank you for taking the time.

[Alessander]

No problemo, wraith. I tend to only review pieces I like beforehand ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow i love when poets use non-poetic things and turns them poetic...
the sink, the flies, the scraps of porcelain ...yes, i think sometimes the Lord is a bit insane and laughing loudly up there.