Office.

Lacking something 

Something lacking 

spat out thoughts

and sent them packing

Stream profanities 

through funneled ears

Sweeping the membrane 

File away fears

Reviews

[W.k.kortas]

I would agree with jacob as to how the rhythm of the piece catches one's ear first--the regular beat of humdrum office days (or a slave ship, for that matter), and I think the short, sharp lines only serve to emphasize the beat. Very nice piece of work.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

spit out those negative thoughts...those fears of life, send them packing.

this has such an easy beat to it...the rhythm of purging the scourging thoughts.