Unsaved memory

Running oil

Symbiotic clicks and frames

Short sharp moments

I couldn't predict

Outcomes we don't know if we could have changed

Spoiled, Glitching

Deformed pauses

Veins don't know their colours 

shouldn't belong against asphalt

Nerves, a gentle web 

Tangled into the grains

Drained sky crouch over this wreck

Remains reflect like flames in the grey

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the metaphor to the engine of the car...i see this as a relationship...the ups the downs, how the nerves are frayed by conflict...and eventually the relationship is like a car wrecked and in flames...not much remains to identify the victims of a love gone wrong.

[Sami Khalil]

I like how you compare memory to a gentle web. Bravo.........