bails

Take off

Lime green reflection raping parking lots

Make my bed with the cockroaches and now I lay

highly emotive, elephant exploding 

Wrap up the hay, world doesn't stop like a donut

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like "elephant exploding" as in hills like white elephants (hemingway) because that elephant is something that we are carrying around...something that is unmentionable but weighing us down...

and the world is not neat...there are always loose ends to deal with.

nicely expressed.