TEMPTED LOVE

Your love is a crystal
Expensive than a thousand gold
Sweet words with solem smiles
No wonder the bird sings along with you


Your charming voice,sweet like honey
Melting down the heart of mighty men
No wonder people run after you


Binding me with rope never to cut loose
No wonder man was tempted with an apple
What a tempted love


Leaving without you will be a torment
Strongly people will say you cast a spell
Temptation!!!!!!! Temptation

Your kind of love can never be resisted
Only a fool will see the beauty and deny
Tempted love so to say.


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Reviews

[Celie Rose]

Enjoyed reading. I really like the first stanza.
"Your love is a crystal
Expensive than a thousand gold
Sweet words with solem smiles
No wonder the bird sings along with you."
Your poem flowed nicely, was well expressed
and written. Good job. Keep writing.