love it will come.....(don't rush!!)

painful and struggling 

you left me

at the end of that road

happy i stood there

as i saw you so sure

i thought it was real 

the

love that you showed

they told me to move on

but i stood by that store

where you told me you will come back

i was a fool

i waited

then i hated

each day

slowly and then more

but then she came

with a letter

and dropped it 

'by the store

it said 

she

watched me everyday

from the window next door

she felt my pain

and she could not take it anymore

and slowly she healed me

by her love

her trust

and the faith in me she showed

she took me away

i forgot that store

and now after 5 years

when we were walking on that same road

we saw a girl crying

the guy laughed as she moaned

i saw it was you

i felt some pain

but

i could not help you

no more

it is the truth they say

"it's a small world in the end

it comes back to you , 

even if you hide,run or 

you don't know "

Reviews

[Sometimes Blood]

Great emotion filled write my friend

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

Wow, this piece touched me so deeply. Excellent write.

[prodicallife]

Dear ASB,

Great write once again. You maintained the tune and harped it with very measured feelings with it.

It has a lot of truth attached to it.

It is great, if you get the one back which had left you around for some reason as, they value you importance and then they come back.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[DIVYA]

I related this fine poem to Karma. I always believe in the saying what goes around come back too...Bravo Asb.

[Asb]

that is true...thanx for the review :)

[Madalyn Beck]

This is my favorite part.

"and slowly she healed me
by her love
her trust
and the faith in me she showed"

Absolutely love that. Good write!

[Asb]

thanx madalyn ..... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"and slowly she healed me
by her love
her trust
and the faith in me she showed"
Great wisdom in your words. Love take time and patience. I agree. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Asb]

thanks for the kind words !!