take me away

a poem on how a person is full of disappointment and just wants to leave the world he lives in...!

take me away

this is all what i pray

failing each day 

to reach those gates

u close them before i can

even say

that i am there

that i am there

i am there

the trust u broke

and the lies u gave

there's nothing more

that i can say

take me away

every night am lonely

even in my dreams

i'm bound in ur lies

i feel that am crying 

to be alive....

so just hate me tonight

because

ur love was never right

and i don't feel anyone by myside

i fail to feel alive

all i want to see is

the world where i can be free

everything i give is not wasted in time

and memories

it's all what i say 

fading each day

mourning in pain

giving it all away

so take me away

this love is a crazy thing

it takes everything out when it's in

we fight for a single thing

fail to feel what they think

 

and i feel far away

even when i choose to stay

choking each day

my life is turning grey.....

so take me away

take me away

take me away.....

Reviews

[Pi Cee]

The lack of spelling certainly gives off an adolescent feel. Though isn't this the feeling, all of us, every day, one minute or the next, keep it up. But you might want to start using the word 'you'...

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

I understand the feeling of wanting to be taken-away . . Away to a better place .. A place where LOVE abides .. And truth is always spoken ..

I hear you .. Jazz

[FelicityAllona]

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