Your Eyes

Dedicated to that special one

 Some days, I wake up shocking, 

Denying the fact that you are really mine.
Then the mighty truth comes up, 

And I realize you are truly mine.

Your beauty is impossible to describe,

Its even more than those angels above the skies.

I fail to admire you every time,

Because I don't have enough words in my mind.

My cravings for your love will never die,

Eternity will never be enough for me to be with you.

I can cross a thousand miles,

Just to see that look in your eyes.

I can fight the whole world,

Just to make you mine.

I'll be whatever you want me to be,

I'll be your thoughts in your mind.

I'll be your happiness in your eyes,

I'll be your emotions in your veins.

I'll bring down the stars if you want me to,

Just to see that smile on your face .

And whenever I see a tear in you eye,

Another one goes down from mine too.

I just want to wipe that away,

Make you, and myself happy too.

Of everything I've ever seen , your eyes are the deepest,

Always showing all the love and care.

Of everything I've ever seen , your eyes are the brightest,

Carrying all the deepest concerns.

Author's Note

Please let me know of my mistakes, I am just a beginner.. :)

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

A very deep love that only a poet like yourself can find.

Another one goes down from mine. Eliminate too.

[Aditya kumar]

thank you very much..

[Emily]

I love how you started it! Keep it up!

[Aditya kumar]

thank you very much :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

The poem carries a certain sweetness and vulnerability. I can feel your love.

[Aditya kumar]

Thanx for stopping by :)

[Basu Gupta]

Quite a good start..
emotions completely expressed..felt the real beauty of your piece..
keep writing bro..thanks for sharing

[Aditya kumar]

will surely (Y) thanks for reviewing :)