vision of dark days

VisiON OF DARK DAYS

A fear deep cited about the arrival of dark days.The days which are unwanted,unexpected.Tackling with matters which were once tackled by someone else.I was not at the front for the bullet shots in the war.I was a civilian before having a sound sleep.Comfortable on my imaginary pillow which was his strong and at the same time soft arm.The most cozy pillow in this entire world.I could sleep for hours on this pillow.I was fortunate enough to enjoy such sleep.i felt myself truly lucky.But now the wheel of fortunate has turned.I am on the frontier now,equipped with the best i could have or what he has prepared me with.Who knew that these long hours of sleep on my cozy bed was not for ever.Never thought that from my comfortable ,protected fairy land,i will be directly transferred to the war zone.The war zone of LIFE.I never imagined that Life could bring a closed string of trails and tribulations which will come to me in loop form.Standing like a six year old girl  who has lost her parents in a fair,still tackling and facing the ordeals.At one time standing with all the courage,bold enough to fight but the next moment falls on the ground.The confident strong woman lies on its knees from inside.I shiver while imagining such time.Hours pass making myself understand that its over.The bed of roeses is no more.I can now sense the meaning of the word ‘shattered’ and ‘courage’ because i am experiencing both the feelings one after the other.Till now i am standing in the war zone with as much courage as i have gathered.I still have some power to understand the words of Theodre Roosvelt that the courage is not about being going on .Its about when you don’t have the strength still you are going on.But i tremble with the thoughts of giving up.Now i am not afraid of tears.I am afraid of darkness.I am afraid of silence.I am afraid of the void.I am afraid of being lifeless.Because i have already started feeling such sensations in me.....

     Adiyah

Reviews

[Sanjh]

It's nice Adiyah. Deep and thought provoking. Keep it up, you've got the spark. :)

[TheLostMind]

This one is good; quite captivating. You have used your imagination quite well. I think the font you have used could be changed ( just my opinion..).

[Adiyah]

It is monotonous only...i wrote dis piece d day i was upst...

[Adiyah]

Thnku fr reviewng :)

[several thousand]

Raw and insightful. I liked they way you've expressed yourself here. Thanks for sharing.

[Adiyah]

thnx fr reviwng poet :)

[several thousand]

You are very welcome.

[Arunima]

Apart from a few mistakes in punctuation....it's an extremely well written piece with dynamic depyth of thoughts..a few lessons...emotions...sayings....written in a concise manner but with such expertised thought processing..:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good story. Just use the capital letters to lead a new sentence and ensure proper separation of sentence. I like the honest tone and accepting the situation. You create interesting place and character. Thank you for sharing the excellent story.
Coyote

[Adiyah]

Ok sir.ill take care of it in future :)