A star.

She reminds me of a bright star , she shines ! Despite the darkness surrounding her  trying to devour her soul , she shines . Lonely in space, nothing to hold her tight , she shines. Roaming in the void , forsaken , emptiness is the only road , she still shines . She is so far away , left with a million word unspoken , she shines. She still shines because she's stunning , she still shines and she dosen't know how marvelous is her light , all she can see is the eternal nightfall ! She still shines because she's a pure soul , a fallen angel sent to print an innocent smile on the hopless faces of who can really discover the real her , the beauty hidden in her soul , the bright sights knocking on her door !From the bottom of my heart , I hope that this star sees a falling star today , to grant her a wish , to gently spread happiness in her heart.

Reviews

[MelissaAndres]

Very good! I love the repetition in the beginning. Just a suggestion, perhaps do a little proofreading before posting - I noticed a few mistakes but they weren't too distracting. If this is about someone you truly know, she sounds lovely!