Rejection

A Poem by Amanda

Jagged words—

Stabbing heat:

Ice seals my heart.

Voice chills passion,

Obliterates sensation,

Leaving only

A frozen heart

Filled with pain.

© 2008 Amanda

Author's Note

An attempt to make my poetry more concise and my words more meaningful.

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Added on May 10, 2008

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Amanda

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About

I started writing for fun when I was about nine, but I became more serious about actually taking the time to write when I was eleven. Since I started writing, I have played around with many styles an.. more..