Cloud

Cloud vanishing.

Cloud

 

Some doors must close

in order that others may open

as fragmental moments of my life

are left behind

so as to keep abandoned

cold empty spaces aglow.

 

A cloud dissipates

into the aether

never to cry again …

Reviews

[Anahat]

loved the last three lines..Absolutely beautiful :)

[Zahra]

wow this brief poem hold so much wisdom.
A cloud dissipates
into the aether
never to cry again …

awesome

[Pryde Foltz]

Some doors must close
in order that others may open
as fragmental moments of my life
are left behind
so as to keep abandoned
cold empty spaces aglow.

The acceptance of the temporal nature of all things. Beautiful and poignant, Aethereal:)

[Troy Henson]

They do say that as one door closes another opens..i think its important though that we don't leave a piece of ourselves behind the closed door.

Troy

[Alfred Kukitz]

As though the angel has fallen on bad times and vanishes into the heavens. Large words in small spaces is very difficult to do. Nice!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"into the aether/ never to cry again"---

really nice...

i like the paradoxes in this...the "cold empty spaces aglow"---