Ignoring and getting ignored

Wrote this just a few days back. :)

Memories fade like dust in air.
Ignorance takes over all due care.
Smiles get faker day-by-day.
'Hmm, Okay', is all that's left to say.

'Contacts' remain just another number,
No calls or messages whatsoever.
Spending night gets harder with time
Yet the same lie, 'I am all fine.'

Reviews

[Abraham George]

truth about life man, All friends that we have in schools and collages will say that they will keep in touch and will reply only when we sent a message.

its a world of competition and everyone is on a race. that's why noone have time for others

Simple and sweat

[Agnibo]

I am really, really happy that you could relate my poem to the exact thing I thought nind while writing this down.

And, yes, everyone. Be it friends, relatives or whosoever; everyone starts ignoring you after a certain time. That's exactly why I wrote this down.

Thanks for reading. And, thank you for the compliment. :)

[mou]

a picture that could be seen by opening the daily window of life..simple yet complete note..beautifully written poem.
mou.

[Paul]

True words right there. I could totally relate to what you were saying in this poem. As I'm sure we all can. Well written! Thanks for sharing.

[Isabella Ivy]

So sad. So true how this happens. It's good to record these sorrows in poetry, for ourselves or for others who can't put words on their ache. The next to the last line should probably read 'the night' or 'a night' to make it correct. Good write! I.I.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can become harder. We must something worthwhile to do. We do keep fake face and tell lies to be left alone. I felt the disappointment and the anger in the poetry.
Coyote

[Sonakshi Arora]

This poem is absolutely true and relatable. With the modern world, it gets hard to differentiate between fake and real! Keep it up :)

[matrixmark]

So many true words are in this piece, and its so very sad when these things start to take place.
You do see the fake smiles, the 'Ill stay in touch, the yeah I'm doing Ok line starts to come out a lot.

Friendships do turn to dust along with many empty promises of saying in touch.

A truthful piece and it makes you ask why cant this world be a better place.

Mark.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. That's so true. I can totally relate to it. I guess that's the truth in today's world. Beautifully written I loved it.

[Agnibo]

I am really happy that you can relate to it. :) And, it's indeed true in today's world.
Thank you so much. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺