Where are you, Father?

This piece is about a child who does not know that his/her father is no more and still awaits him.

Where are you, Father?
Have you left me for ever?
Is there something I lack?
Is so you aren't yet back?
Don't you you love me?
Or is that my love you can't see?
Why are you taking so long?
Is there something wrong?
Father, please, come back,
I can't be anymore strong.

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

The Feeling in these lines are so immense that will fill your heart with love and pain.
It relates to everyone who are in search of a father's love and who is very weak that he needs his support.
Very genuine writing. Keep writing:)

[Krutika]

The writing is precise and the underlying thought is put in a way that it is relatable and easily felt.
That is a biggest achievement for a writer. Rest of technicalities you can always improve on as you write more..
Keep up the good work 😊👍 Happy Writing :)

[Isabella Ivy]

I feel the sorrow. It's a lovely display of poetry, but I think some of the English is a bit off, if you can search that out. Thank you for allowing me to read :) I.I.

[Agnibo]

I am happy you could connect to it. :)
Yes, I will try to correct the English. Thanks for reading.
And, you are welcome.

Agnibo

[Isabella Ivy]

It was my pleasure :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I was raised-up by kind Grandparent. I had a AWOL father. Hard to grasp when you are young. You father had left your life. The words solid and the feel of real emotion and regret. Thank you Agnibo for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Agnibo]

Yes, Cryote! That's really hard to believe when you are young.
Thank you, Coyote. :) I am glad that you liked it. By the way, what's an AWOL father? :/

[Coyote Poetry]

Absence without leave. Old Army term and you are welcome.

[matrixmark]

My reviews are normally fairly constructive, but for this piece i will use just one word as my review and that word is.......touching.

Mark.

[Agnibo]

Thank you so much, Mark. :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

This is so well written! See now you've made me emotional😢😢

[Agnibo]

Aww!! That's the best compliment. I always wanted to make people emotional, happy, laughing etc. :)
Thnak you so much for reading, Sonakshi. :) Chillax now!

[Sonakshi Arora]

Haha yep! Great job...

[Agnibo]

Thanks, Sonakshi! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

So heart touching. It feels devastating to lose ones parents. I liked the true emotions you have written.

[Agnibo]

Yes, you are right. It feels so devastating to lose the once we love.
I am happy that you could connect to it. Thanks for reading. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺