A faith that loves

A faith that loves 

 

Souvenirs travelling across minds 

Mysteries unlocking lost finds 

The path I take I narrate mine 

Happy life, prosperity shines 

 

Hanging faith, brightening hence,

Another war preparing my fence 

 

I narrate my story, no boundaries 

Chased by big hound doggies 

The land was highly foggy

I drowned in love got all soggy 

 

I come from the house I made 

Yet met a very good fate

A hypocrite I have been 

That has led me to this state 

 

                     - Ahena MK 

Reviews

[mahima]

Interesting and mysterious!! Nicely penned ahena :-!

[Rida Sarwar]

Finely expresses the emotions and thoughts ;-)

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!

[Costa Siwale]

I like the mysteriousness in this piece, thumbs up

[Ahena MK]

thank you...

[Saddam]

Souvenirs travelling across minds
Mysteries unlocking lost finds
The path I take I narrate mine
Happy life, prosperity shines
Your poem contain many meanings...if i am not wrong. Creation with imagination for a real experience is big thrill. love you art.

[Ahena MK]

Glad you liked it :)

[Saddam]

my pleasure....

[KeeD]

This was nice, a good contrast of personalities, it did fluctuate a little but I enjoyed the meaning of the entire piece.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!!

[DIVYA]

Great poetry with some great artwork Ahena. Thanks for the lovely read.

[Ahena MK]

thanks ....

[Praveeta]

"Souvenirs travelling across minds
Mysteries unlocking lost finds
The path I take I narrate mine
Happy life, prosperity shines"

I like the positive vibe I get from this stanza.

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it !!

[Rehan Roy]

'Souvenirs travelling across minds ' 'I drowned in love.. ' A beautiful write.

[Ahena MK]

thank you !!

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

The idea is quite nice Ahena...but I do not like the third stanza...I don't like the words you chose...but it is a valiant attempt and the rest of it is quite nice. Thank you for the RR

[Ahena MK]

thanks for your views !!