A faith that loves

A faith that loves 

 

Souvenirs travelling across minds 

Mysteries unlocking lost finds 

The path I take I narrate mine 

Happy life, prosperity shines 

 

Hanging faith, brightening hence,

Another war preparing my fence 

 

I narrate my story, no boundaries 

Chased by big hound doggies 

The land was highly foggy

I drowned in love got all soggy 

 

I come from the house I made 

Yet met a very good fate

A hypocrite I have been 

That has led me to this state 

 

                     - Ahena MK 

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too, but I am a but unsure which direction it intends to go, doggy and soggy more light hearted, other lines more serious, feel it needs a clearer intention !

[Ahena MK]

ya ! forced it that way ... thanks for reading !

[Frieda P]

Sorry I had to snicker a wee bit at 'soggy love'....how apropos when you think about it...ahh the mysteries of life and love that bring us to where we dwell, always a challenge my friend, nicely pen'd. ;-)

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !! :)

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure, put a smile on my face! :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

"I come from the house I made
Yet met a very good fate
A hypocrite I have been
That has led me to this state ".

Indeed Ahena we are what our past has made us .I loved this verse :)

[Ahena MK]

glad you liked it :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

"The land was highly foggy

I drowned in love got all soggy



I come from the house I made

Yet met a very good fate"

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)............

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for reading !!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Muchly...:)....................