Thinking

A Poem by Ahmad Cox

Thinking

Thinking
Can sometimes
Get me in trouble
Thinking
Can be the thing
That gets in the way
Of the feeling
But sometimes
I have to let go
And just allow myself to feel

© 2012 Ahmad Cox

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Barbara Walker

I think this would sound better if you changed the word, "But" to "So". Very nice write! The heart and the mind; so many times they can be at odds with each other.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Ahmad Cox

Thank you

Posted 13 Years Ago

Junert

I love this.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Ahmad Cox

Yeah this a constant issue for me

Posted 13 Years Ago

Steven Cash

hmmm... i need to think about this one

aha lol jk nice job

Posted 13 Years Ago

Amanda

I really like this, great job. I have a problem with with over-thinking, so I can relate.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on September 2, 2012
Last Updated on September 2, 2012

Author

Ahmad Cox

San Jose, CA

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My name is Ahmad and I have posted a lot of my poetry on hellopoetry.com but I wanted to check out this site and see if I can start posting and reading poetry here. more..