There is a little God in everyone. There is a little god Inside of you God is just waiting For you to accept that. We all have a choice We have accept it It cant be forced But once you see The god in you And in everyone Nothing Will ever Be the same
I like the first three lines the best because of their metrical quality. The problem for me is that the very next line, the fourth one, demands almost a religious devotion, when in fact it might be better to let this unfold as a description of individual will, with subtle religious undertones.
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When I first got the idea for this poem I wanted it to express the fact that God created the univers.. read moreWhen I first got the idea for this poem I wanted it to express the fact that God created the universe and God also created all of us. Therefore, there is a little piece of God inside of all of us as well. When you can accept that, you begin to realize just how connected and just how beautiful we all are in our ways. When you can accept the God in yourself, you can accept in others and start to see God in everything around you. When you get to that point, there is a healing that comes from knowing God and knowing that everything that ever existed is right here inside of us and that God loves us all the same, regardless if we don't understand or see for ourselves. That is the true mercy of God. Even knowing we would stray and we might go against his will and separate ourselves from him, he still gives us the choice to accept him or not.
So God created man in his own image, in the image of God he created him; male and female he created them. The body reflects God's image by first of all being one in substance. God as a trinity is one being, acting with as much unity as our soul acts with our body. Each of us is sacred and every bit the likeness of God. This is a very thoughtful write which reminds us of our responsibility as human.
Posted 13 Years Ago
13 Years Ago
Thank you for your wonderful and beautiful insight. It is so true
Namaste. This is very good i like it and it's true everyone has a little god in them they just have to stop and listen. And if you don't know what Namaste is ill inbox you. Nice poem, good job!
-SkyeBlanco
Posted 13 Years Ago
13 Years Ago
Yep. Its actually a pretty term. I believe it translates to I see the light in you
very nice, and I like how you explained it as 'God Potential'. You have to realize/unlock it
its something people have and never really realize unfortunately
Very true..somewhere inside you know there is god helping you through everythng and he helps you alwayz through everythng..marvelluous..:D
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13 Years Ago
Yep. He is the one that drives everything in this world and without him we would be lost. It is beca.. read moreYep. He is the one that drives everything in this world and without him we would be lost. It is because of his light that we are able to see.
My name is Ahmad and I have posted a lot of my poetry on hellopoetry.com but I wanted to check out this site and see if I can start posting and reading poetry here. more..