Free

Free

by Ahmad Cox

The little God in us remembers

What it's like to be whole

To be complete

And to be one with everything

We spend so much time doubting ourselves

Not really understanding our worth

Feeling lost and disconnected

From where we think we should be

But every one of us has this inside of them

We just need to remember who we are again

To truly set our souls free

Reviews

[Fashell]

Hmmmm.... This is how I've been feeling. Doubts in my self and future. I like when you can read someone's work and connect yourself to it. You can understand the writer and feel as though a dialogue is being exchanged. A mutual understanding has been developed in some way. Yes! Great job on this. I like it a lot. This was good. You brought me to a place of thought and to really seek God during times like this to renew myself. Thank you for sharing this. :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I always like for my poems to be able to touch or to help people in some way so I am glad that my poem could speak to you in that way. It makes me happy.

[Barbara Walker]

Your depth of soul is encouraging in this world of ours. I start doubting we will ever get where we need to be, until I meet someone like you, but oh, so rare!

[Allycat]

It's short but says so much!
great piece ahmad

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I love the thought of remembering who we are...I do believe we have a form of amnesia sometimes. You have said it well.

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Really great piece, well written

[Mia]

This very powerful, I agree with Steven. Very well done

[Steven Cash]

Powerful

Bravo my man

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I think we all want to be free in our own ways.

[Steven Cash]

Yes, we do