Exciting

Ahmad Cox · 1 second ago

Excited

The world has gone crazy
There is turmoil every where
Divisions all around
It seems like people
Are going backwards
Falling darker into the night
Falling deeper into the void
Living with hate in their hearts
Living at the brink of nothing
Living with depression
Living with despair
Without an ounce of grace
Moving further away from the light
Every thing goes these days
Without any sense of control
Or consequences
People have lost their minds
And it seems to get worst every day
But even through all the craziness
Even through all of the chaos
Even through all of the darkness
There is a part of me that is excited
Excited to see what is to come
We live on the brink
There is a chasm before us
We are just about to jump
And we are about to cross
Even as crazy as life might seem
There is still hope, love, grace, and mercy
And there are still miracles hiding in the dark
We just have to know where to look
To see the goodness and the light
That is waiting for us to accept it
To acknowledge that its there
Once you do life takes on a different tone
It takes on a whole new beauty and purpose
You start to see just how wonderful and crazy times
We are living in and you can become excited to 
Living with light and grace and hope
And learning how to spread that sense of excitement
To everyone you meet

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Your optimism is contagious!

[Beck Louise]

A very optimistic and bright outcome to this poem :) Perfectly describes the craziness of life! Well done :)

[Jo March]

Beautiful poem. So sweet, yet descriptive of the crazy world we live in. Well done!

[J. Write]

A great poem expressing the chaos in the world. I like the simplicity and how you spoke of hope towards the end. Well done.

[luviva]

proper ryt........ the world is going into darkness, but there is still light!
thanxx for sharing this

[Nautili]

beautful and optimistic, acknowledging the darkness present in the world but also believing in the light.....child-like in its sheer joy in living and loving. Thank you for sharing!

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I am glad you could get the bigger meaning

[Sirius King]

great message
and very true...the world has gone crazy

nice write