At last

At last
I am here
I am me
I am breathing
Each Second
Each minute
Each moment
At last
I have arrived
I am alive
I exist
Always 
Forever
In the endless vacuum of time
Flowing ever present
Gliding ever freely
I am beyond myself
At last

       

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

The feelings you describe just enough to make it feel light and nice.

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I wanted the message to be simple and short yet powerful at the same time.

[Barbara Walker]

this is so transcendental, I can feel how you soar from your words!

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad this poem could have that effect on you.

[Ban Heo]

the general trend that I've noticed with your poetry is that you cut your lines really short and you have no stanza breaks. I feel like this effect is nice, but we all should leave our comfort zones frequently as poets.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yeah I tend to be more of a free form poet. I generally let whatever flows out into my poetry. Usually its something that either I need to hear or serves as some healing message to someone that needs it or even comes in the form of a prayer or a message sent from my higher self.

[scripted]

thats how i feel about this year for the first time i feel like im able to me...
the best year of my life is almost over. the year of hope, love, and the year i found who i really was... love this poem

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad it could speak to you.

[Bound In Red]

A free feeling comes over this reader. I love reading all of your work. :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you. I really appreciate that. I always love the poems you send to me as well.

[Bound In Red]

Welcome. And All I do is try.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

beautiful feeling of the free soul! verses spread from the universe, and the breath of existance and life! yes, i`m here at last and i`m myself, it`s really amazing! great, dear ahmad!
nour~

[Mary]

So interesting... the awareness of the birth- human? spiritual? the birth that follows the exit from the body? A poem to ponder.