amazing poem, as always the style is emphasizing the content, it`s written as if in fast breathing, and fast, accelerating - is so common today- even time start to be faster and faster, every day may look like passing without any trace, if we didnt leave our trace of Love and help. I love it much, my favorite verses:
As our hearts combine
As one as we move
Ever quicker to
The point where
We can be one
Very insightful poem! Yes, we are always accelerating, getting closer to the end but also closer to our hopefully futures. To a new dawn and a new day... :)
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