Babe's Lament

First shot at Senryu. Don't laugh.

Ululating babe,

Shrouded in your mother's arms,

This is not your home

Author's Note

Don't laugh....

Reviews

Aw. I'm doing anything but laughing. As a mother myself, I'm envisioning it being right after birth when the baby is put into your arms crying their head off because they were ripped from warmth and darkness (of their home for the last 9 months) into a cold bright hospital room. "This is not my home!"

[Norma M Sutton]

I like it.

[Amit Parmessur]

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[MuSe Ampoule]

No laughing here! This is great!!! Thanks for sharing!