Ink

Newer poem...

Stress consumes me,

attempting to take over my will to live,

I begin to fall.

 

I fall far and hard,

my pen does not waver,

ink pours from its inside.

 

My writing showers me in relief,

the pain is easing,

ink allows me to see light in this dark.

Author's Note

anything?

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

Cool poem!!! I think it describes the reason most people write poetry for either a hobby or profession. At least the ones that are any good at it. Such as yourself! Seriously, this is a great poem!

[Juliet]

Lovely haiku, actually my favorite. Probably because when I was little I only read rhyming poems. B ut yours defies what I used to think. A handful of words but a lot of meaning. Wonderful :)

[Empirik]

Great! It is so nice to feel the comfort of familiar faces, or mediums. There is nothing like the confidence given by something known from experience or history. Love it!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is very true...an emotive write!.. Lovely Haiku (Senryu).
I love how you have expressed a release of suffering~ Well done!