Two peaceful Haikus

         Swans
Why can't we be swans?
Mating for life in such peace.
Shame it truly is...

         Night
Why do i love it?
That i am not quite sure yet.
Peaceful peaceful night...

Author's Note

anything guys?

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

swans are such graceful birds. it would be nice to find a mate for life...night has so many things about it to love. in summer i like the floral smells, the grass, even the pavement. very soothing haikus. great job.

[exotic flotsam]

Cool analogy between human emotional flightiness, hope for us, should we be willing to learn. Night is calm. No intrusive noise, sun, chaos. Night provides a comforter of tranquility. Like 'em. I'm a Haiky addict. Well done.