Lolipop

A Poem by Aka_Kitsune

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you my dear
are as sweet as a lolipop
giving me such a treat
every time we speak

i go to you
in need of sugary goodnes
because you my dear
as are sweet as a lolipop

© 2012 Aka_Kitsune

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dontwakeme

This made me giggle.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Marie

that is very sweet...as in your lover. "Lolipop" is spelled "lollipop."

Posted 13 Years Ago

MandaBear

aww this is so sweet :) Love it great write :P

Posted 13 Years Ago

Dark Aeris

Maybe I'm just in a rare good mood since I totally had a "awwwwwwwwwwww that's adorable!!!!" girly moment. O__o

Weird.

Regardless I like this poem. :D

Just one thing, "goodness" has TWO s's[ s-es? Idk how to write s in plural form...]

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on March 28, 2012
Last Updated on March 28, 2012

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Aka_Kitsune

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my real name is Shawn Jewell, i wish to make a small name for myself & perhaps make a friend or two as i continue writing :) i mostly write poetry but i am in the process of working on a book :D .. more..