Fly

just a strange thought i formed into a free verse poem, tell me what you think

My feathers feel the bliss of the air
as i sore through the clouds endlessly 
oh how i love to fly

 Until the wretched thunder comes
waking me from a deep sleep
flying is just another dream

Author's Note

anything guys?

Reviews

[Silver_Anime]

i really like it! ^_^

[mariah]

i love it. i felt the emotions of the poem and felt free! but then i read the end and realised it was just a dream. lol great job :)
-Mariah

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Wonderful! Flying is one of the greatest examples of human limitations.

[MandaBear]

Love it :) I have always wanted to fly but only in my dreams can it happen. great write :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love it!...Flying in a dream is enthralling...I've had many dreams where I take flight, soaring in the sky...the Bliss is indescribable...

This is truly lovely...great job! :)