Conflicted

"Why....!?"

Can you just 

Tell me what

I did wrong to you.

I hate this feeling

Like you're a victim

Of a crime that I committed.

This spicy silence

Feels like violence

It hurts me right in here.

My heart is a teacup

About to tip over

Just tell me what's up

And it'll all be over.

Don't make angry glances

From the other side of the room.

You're wrong for putting me in stances

When I innocently ask: "What'd I do?"

Reviews

[Inda]

"You know what you did!" lol JK. this is a great piece that most can relate to, hope you found out what you did.

[Akashi]

haha thanks for reading xD

[Arooj Purra]

Nice poem ...actually this poem has a feel of cry, like i mean u think that u need a break that type of feeling is expressed in this poem...

[Akashi]

Yep. Thanks for reading and reviewing :>

[Arooj Purra]

your welcome dear.

[Jess]

Amazing poem. Nicely expressed emotions.
''This spicy silence
Feels like violence
It hurts me right in here''---specifically enjoyed these lines.
Keep up the good work. :))

[Akashi]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem, and I love the teacup line...great !

[Akashi]

Thank you!

[Patricia Wedel]

My heart is a tea cup About to tip over...
describes the vulnerability of a smile...
Sailing away on dreams. truly, Pat

[Akashi]

Thank you for reading :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem.
"This spicy silence
Feels like violence
It hurts me right in here."
I like the words "spicy silence". A anger person is best left alone. Better to allow the dust to settle than re-set a fire. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Akashi]

Thank you for reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.