Epitaph.

Rocks tear out their hearts

Yearn for the flow of your blood

Crows are shedding tears

Reviews

[ZeeArsonist]

I am in love with this one. The imagery is so sharp and quick. A wincing stirs inside all my personal aches. Feeling my full bloom extracted, gutted and left for the scavengers. I can hear the crows laughing. Fantastic write here.

[akihsna]

Why there, thank you heaps for your review! And to say that "dark" writings weren't really my forte, hehe!! Thanks again. :)

[Tai Ryens]

Seeing as the flow breaker presumably used by the last line; I assume you portray the heart to be a crow; black as night? Rocks being the hefty tears shed, and the yearning for blood originates from the sense of emptiness felt when this coal heart breaks down. I could only imagine what influenced and inspired such a dashing poem! Lovely job.

[akihsna]

Exactly :) Coming from you, it doesn't surprise me if you have perfectly interpreted this haiku of mine and I'm indeed glad that you gave a beautiful picture of these words.
Well my inspiration came from one of the darkest mishaps which ever occurred to me. I've been well acquainted with Death a few times in the journey of my Life. Perhaps it is but dark memories which acted as an influence, something which still has a great impact when I'm with Loneliness.
Thank you heaps for your review Tai :)

[Tai Ryens]

Ah, I am well acquainted with metaphors as Plath taught me through her poetry books; and though difficult, it always entertains me to interpret poetry in my own words; perhaps in the poet's own as well. And the fact that it i derived from dark times makes it all the more enjoyable; as poetry is best when originating from dark moments in life.