Sunday

A day I shall never forget..

Wreaths and chanting birds

In harmony with your smile

And you bid goodbye

Reviews

[Draven]

Well done, well done. I fell in love with the way I got caught up in the poem and then hit suddenly with the last line. Beautiful.

[MagicAl]

Captures the sorrow at the same time as a beautiful goodbye. Elegant work.

[Glass Heart Inc]

I like it. I would have liked to know what happened before that goodbye.

[yash]

too short and painful, is what it seems to me...