Blue Flame

A fire undoused
A rhythm flowing inside
A feeling denied

Reviews

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

first line reveals like a revenge or an outrageous wish that still remains alive within u.......... a soft music kind thats flowing inside u as always ........ i like to refer it to heart beat as if is a never ending rhythm until we die........ n we can hear it wen we r alive.......... a feeling denied we can predict that something u r urging to get but was denied due to some reasons like society......... finance ........ physical disabilities etc etc............ Sounds a gr8 creation!!!!! Nice job buddy

[akihsna]

hm, I'd rather go for an outrageous yet guilt-feeling wish which beats along with my heart!
And yes, I very much appreciate your review cause you really depicted this haiku like it was supposed to be understood and felt. Thank you so much, Nidheesh!

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

Really my pleasure to read these lines........ Keep up the good work

[Roger Turgeon]

Sounds to me like hope and unfulfilled dreams, the "more" you want in your life. Nice!!

[akihsna]

It could be...but perhaps now is not the right time for me to be pondering on it...
But above all, it rings with a mysterious feeling I yet have to figure out and ...mixed emotions.
Thank you for the review, Sir :)

[Roger Turgeon]

Mixed emotions call for pondering

[akihsna]

I true that haha! But I got more important things to do for the time being!