Forget me

Forget me to ease your pain...

why two people close their eyes
when kissing?
Because they are so dazzled
by each other.
In that short moment
with my eyes closed...
I'll miss you.

 

 

I love you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

 

 

Forgiving... is giving your hate
just a little room in your heart.

 

 

How badly do I wish
to show you my heart!

 

 

You were the best thing
that ever happened to me.

 

 

How thankful I am to God
for having sent you as a gift to me.

 

 

I don't have to remember you.
You're a part of me.

 

 

I smile,laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,

Since I am loosing my memory
but nothing can drive you
out of my body.

Although you've never told me
you loved me...
I know deep in my heart
that you love me.

 

 

Forgive me for leaving you.
Please...

 

 

For the last time
I have a favor to ask.
forget me..

 

 

Reviews

[Dev]

This is a very emotional poem, and I for one liked it a lot. Technically a few things are here and there (I've taken the liberty to edit your poem but it's just as a reference guide. You don't have to make the changes if you don't want to.) The idea behind this write is very heart breaking; Losing a lover. Love isn't easy but I guess that's the way everything in life is.

Why do people close their eyes when kissing?
Because they're so dazzled by each other;
In that short moment, with my eyes closed, I miss you.

I have loved you
Since the moment I saw you.
I'm sorry that I couldn't do
anything for you.

Forgiving is giving your hate
Just a little room in your heart.

How badly do I wish to show you my heart!

You were the best thing that ever happened to me.

How thankful am I to God
For sending you as a gift to me.

I don't have to remember you;
You're a part of me.

I smile, laugh and smell like you do.
I might forget you,
Since I am losing my memory,
But nothing can drive you
Out of my body.

Although you've never told me you loved me,
I know deep in my heart that you do.

Forgive me for leaving you.

Please!


For the last time
I have a favor to ask,
Forget me.

[Ravyne Hawke]

As one losing her memories, I can empathize with you on this. Allowing someone to forget is a noble gesture, but still easier said than done. These lines spoke so much to me:

I don't have to remember you.
You're a part of me.

I absolutely enjoyed this poem and can relate so well to so many lines in it. Great job.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

it is a kind of story in a poem..lovely

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Anuvart]

nicely written piece:)
Going to my favorites!!

[Hitman]

You have written this piece directly from your heart:)

[Shellie]

Sigh. The first part was excellent. It ran away with itself for a bit but i actually liked that about it. and then the sudden ending was so abrupt like a heart ripping in two, really.

[Akshat♥]

I know...thank you for the review :)

[JanieB]

Nicely done.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[deeps]

This is so emotional and it tugs on my heart.
So very nicely written and so well expressed.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Beautiful poem. loved the starting lines :)

[HorrorMaster]

very sad poem, but I enjoy it