I am something that you never expected

Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected

Never expect anything from anybody

Never expect the things that hurt you in return

Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last

Sometimes we feel unwanted

Sometimes we help others so much and

expect something in return

Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much

These expectation always hurt us at last

These feelings of loneliness tear us apart

These bad thoughts create a pressure in us

These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected

I always feel different 

different from others

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,

and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why

and still I love you 

I always feel like flying with birds

and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,

If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,

I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops

I do the unexpected thing

so I also just stop

Author's Note

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Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

[amdc101]

Love this!

[HappyTaylor]

"Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much"
That's my favorite line. I really like this poem, and the quote on the top is my favorite! :) Well written. GREAT job.

[Arielle Ann]

The conclusion is unique...everyone stops when you walk,so you also stop...I loved your play with words here...expectations always hurt...you are too correct in saying this :)

[ForTheWorld]

we are always someone on this world or if not, we are someone on one's life...we may not notice that but that's the fact..people always expect the expected, they forgot to look beyond those, just like we are always looking at the familiar way, we always forgot to look at the new ways

[Daytonight]

Thank you for sharing. Keep on penning.

[kaylynnmelody♥]

this is an awesome write. i felt your emotion in it.. and i loved the proverb at the beginning. i thought this was impecably written.

[Dearantlers]

Wow, that is amazing, and so true! I just really liked it, and the message it sent. And it's written so well. All I can really say is WOW!

[topsyturvy]

I don't know why, but somehow when I read the last line, it seemed so abrupt, so sudden that you came to a stop and it saddened me. Lol!

[alegria]

very well written..nice write...keep writin:)))

[BlindedMinded]

I really enjoyed it, it was comphrehensive (sp) and oddly thought provoking, and quite candid.
Very enjoyable..
:)