Waiting is all I have

well waiting is never easy but when you do not have a choice.. you have to wait for it..

Waiting is something too easy to say

quite callous to understand

Those feelings that I know you had for me

are dead

You crushed my heart like a cigarette

You said you loved me

You said you cared

But now I realized you are just a faker

So now I am left alone in your past

You left me down on a road of hatred

I am still waiting for you on my knees

I know you did not even care

I wish one day you will realize 

how easy it is to say no

When you are screwed from all sides

you only wish to be aside

Waiting is all I have

but remember you are in my thoughts

Author's Note

please give honest reviews as you always do...just rate it too
if you hate it say it..
if you love it..i can judge it

Reviews

[Erica Daubert]

i really liked the "crushed like a cigarette" line. definitely original. i've read a lot of "crushed hearts" lines but that was a first for me. I dig this. I've been there, man. Some people get off more just by f*****g with someones head than actually loving them. It's a type of abuse that most don't recognize because most only associate abuse with violence. That's not always the case. My best advice to you is to leave this person in the past. If they don't want you now... they probably never will. A harsh reality... but you deserve someone that instantly wants you forever, that love at first sight s**t. i hope you find someone that can make you happy. this person just sounds like they're making you cry. good luck in the future. i'll check out some more of your work.

[Akshat♥]

I will try...Thank you...means a lot to me :)

[LinBin]

A rather sad poem expressed with angry words, well written and heartfelt x

[kurdapiaful]

remember, everyone's gonna hurt us eventually. . .
but choose the who's worth your hurt.

Nice write! very reflective of what you really felt inside!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

"Like a cigarette" ....

I saw the flame extinquished and the body completely destroyed.
What a violent image. The love destroyed was a sight I wished to
had been able to unsee. Bravo.

[Rene Velez]

it's good but with a bit of bitterness, as I gather it, love weather good or bad are experiences we have in life, it's how you react to it, that makes it an experience worth living.

[Shy Girl]

We all feel this one friend. (not alone in it at all) Very nicely written, except the on your knees part. NEVER beg!!! I'm sure that was I metaphor, but...best not to go down that road. The poem and pic matched very well together as well. I really did like it. Loss and feeling as though that is the only thing in world and it just crashed can be so true. I did like this piece, (reguardless of the, on your knees part) Very well penned indeed. :) Oh...and I am being honest, I did like it.

[rwar ish me]

very nicely written
Sad but very nice.
I know how it is to have this feeling.
I can relate to this
and I like when I can relate to others poetry.
~Amai

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

I Loved it!

[M Garcia]

real nice

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"Those feelings that I know you had for me
are dead
You crushed my heart like a cigarette"

To wait for someone who doesn't deserve it is the worst sin one can make. Its like sharing your soul to a piece of s**t of a human being. They don't deserve that love. This was beautiful but heart wrenching to read.