Happy To Know You Still Care

You can't predict anything in life...

Most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat.

It gives an assurance that you will survive 

even when the whole world leaves you alone...

and my heartbeat is you

Starting phase of love begins with friendship

and keeping a friend is as difficult as losing one

you sacrifice a lot to keep them.

I may not have sacrified enough for you..

but in my heart I swear am keeping you

Once I wish to have a key to your heart

now I have the heart but the key is lost forever...

We had a fight

We stop talking to each other

Days pass by

I still feel the sense of your touch

How you make me smile

Now those days are over...

We always fight about stupid things

and regret later..

We always feel sorry

and do it again

On my birthday you gave me a rose

and said goodbye..

I was so stupid to think for

one second you actually cared..

Author's Note

Review it and give your honest views...I am waiting:)

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

It would be more inviting to know who this poem is for, but whoever it was lost a valuable friend --anyone who understands that "the most beautiful music is a heartbeat and that heartbeat is for you" would be a good friend indeed. This poem has a nice flow and is SO well written. Thanks, and excellent work!

[The Insanely Vibrant]

a heartfelt poem. there's a flow in your style that pretty much shows how much this friend meant to you

[Sarah W. French]

I liked how it jumped from a feeling that you were taking about a friend and then talking about someone more then that. This was a beautiful read.

[?]

such a beuatiful heartfelt piece.
The first sentence is a winner!!

[Ami N.]

Wow. This was so powerful. The (very fitting and true) picture/quote drew me in and your poem reflected very deep emotions in a beautiful way. Excellent write and I'm so sorry for the loss.

[Nautili]

I can feel your heartfelt pain at losing a friend. There are seasonal friends and lifetime friends, and it takes awhile to figure which is which. I have come to realize that seasonal friends were authentic friends (for the most part) at the time, but for various reasons, could not go the distance. And then without bitterness, I let them go, appreciating the times that I did share with them but knowing full well that only very few friends are going to last a lifetime.

[LilMissWriter17]

'Most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat' this first sentence really pulled me in, and the whole poem itself is very well written, and true :)

[Nath]

I don't think it is stupidity that makes us think a person cares about us as much as we for them, but a deep wish for it to be true.
Sometimes it is true, too, even though sometimes it doesn't last. Whatever happens to a relationship in the end, there are always good times and moments where what we believe is in the other person's heart is indeed true.
Thanks for sharing.

[stars are far]

This was so sweet
i loved this and the picture in the first attracted me a lot
great write :D

[Moriarty]

Nicely written...like the pictures a lot...goes very well with what
you have written...hope that special person who you wrote this piece
for is there with you today...

[Ruth]

Its always a balance to live through such situations! A lesson in life so we are told...regrets, mistakes, hurt and pain, hmm...I am never sure how we get through it...and you are so right...if it hurts, indeed, we do still care!
Great piece love xoxo