van/ty

i’ve seen death and her sister oblivion, 

their secrets and power rest behind my eyes.

 

i’ve lain with luna in her midnight sky, 

the lingering chill of her majesty tingles over the surface of my lips. 

i've waded through pools of blood from beasts slain, 

cloaking my toes in silence and grace. 

i’ve walked through the mists of dimensions unknown, 

the rhythm and mystique hovers around me still. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great use of words and thoughts. Death and oblivion are interesting words and places. I like the flow of the poem leading the reader with questions to ponder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Antoñyo]

A dark potent piece, well-written and thought-provoking!
Enjoyed reading,

Thanks for the share (100/100)

[alan khan]

thank you very much i appreciate what you said.

[Roque]

A poem that opens doors, a seer's poem. So much to take in here, thank you

[alan khan]

Thank you very much. That was awesome for you to say.

[Robin Thomas]

oh wow ---more-more-more-please.

[alan khan]

thank you very very much :)

[Sami Khalil]

First one to review this good poem...Thank you for sharing...:).........................

[alan khan]

thanks very much sir :) appriciated

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...:)................