Let's Build a Home

Love is so close

 

You and me... Let’s build a home

We’ll make it from perfect love and stone

Fill the air with sweet, sweet music

Cram our bellies with fun amusement

 

You and me... Let’s weave a mantle

We’ll snug in more love than we can handle

Breathe the air of inspiration

While our souls bathe in exaltation

 

You and me... let’s merge our spheres

We’ll make up for all those past lost years

Sigh sweet nothings our lips long to pass

Stroll through new adventurous paths

 

You and me... let’s build a home

We’ll make it from perfect love and stone

A haven so everlastingly strong

You and me... let’s sing our song!

Reviews

[Stephen]

~~~ A beautiful write written by a beautiful Alani ~~~

I love how you blend the words with the real or virtual feelings of love. Yeah, it`s true that without love there`s no home so, I do agree with you here ...

You and me... let’s build a home
We’ll make it from perfect love and stone
A haven so everlastingly strong
You and me... let’s sing our song!

~~ Lovely. Heartfelt lines ~~ All verses`re well written in your muse and what all I think is that this poem`s well enhanced like a great song ever indeed. And yeah .. love`s always SO close ;)

Congratulations for your this beautiful write. I adore the piece as I`ve always adored your earlier ones.

[Alani]

Thank you Stephen :)
Probably one of my only love poems (of 2)... and I'm heading into writing another one. Not sure what is going on!

[Stephen]

My pleasure, Alani :)
Umm ..One of your ONLY love poems??? Umm, I think, your every muse`s adorable so, the poems are .. all stuffs of yous are written with an every beat of your fluffy heart indeed and I`ve always enjoyed reading your brilliant work. You know what? "More you headed into the writing, more you find you filled with inspirations ... the inspirations of yous." So, keep writing & my wishes are always with a beautiful Alani .. All the very best for your upcoming stuffs and be calm .. I know, you`d come up with something awesome as always you came up .. it`s been a great pleasure to me to read Alani`s beautiful stuffs and i`m honored for that!! ;)

[SleeplessVolcano]

This makes me want to get my hands dirty and mix some cement or pack some bricks!

I like how you extend the analogy further into also building a life together.

Great piece.

[Alani]

haha!! That's so cool. Thank you! :)
Are you a guy? Because I would not expect a woman to have that as her initial thought :)

[Gee]

A sweet write on love.Enjoyed this

[Alani]

Thank you so much :D

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I really feel like to Build a Home with the beauty of your line We’ll make it from perfect love and stone...

[Alani]

I'm glad the poem resonates with you

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Indeed it is...

[willweb]

This is a beautiful love inspired piece. It is inviting and brightly laced with emotions. It has a song like quality to it. Very good Alani, I really enjoyed this today. Loved weaving a mantle.

[Alani]

:) Thank you!
I am a songwriter actually.. if you like music as much as poetry, you can listen to my songs if you like?
www.soundcloud.com/veronicalook
Veronica Look is my stage name x

[willweb]

I will do that right away.

[A. Amos]

Love is in your heart, in your soul and even in every single blood cell flowing in your veins..i can sense that while reading your words, hope your guy understand the value of being loved and how lucky he is to be in your presence...beautiful work

[Alani]

Thank you Darling! The "guy" is somewhere out there... and I think this write up is an invite to him, wherever he is!

[A. Amos]

All the best my friend and you're most welcome.