Love for my soul

This is what I want

I’m coming up, to breathe for a while

The air seems more fresh, than on the inside

I’ve been hiding in the dark           

Shaved my head and mourned for days

 

The pain cuts right through my chest

To the core of my sadness

Love for my soul I need

To create in me sweet peace

 

I’ll consider, the judgment that I pass

A mere man with humanly traits so vast

But for the love I’ve searched: it’s been a sad journey

This new man, this human..will he keep me mourning?

 

The pain cuts right through my chest

To the core of my sadness

Love for my soul I need

To create in me sweet peace…

 

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Sheer peace of love and sadness together, very nice!

[willweb]

I hope you find this sweet peace Alani. Your poems is haunting but beautiful. I enjoyed reading this today.

[Alani]

Thank you :) I hope so too... and I hope you find your peace too!

[Stephen]

Love for my soul I need
To create in me sweet peace ~~

~~~ Beautiful deep thought-invoking lines ~~~

Umm, love`s meant to be loved living with happiness all of life with special someone ... this poem`s all about your feelings of love. You`ve well expressed your feelings in words ~~ with your emotions ... i`m looking forward to reading your work.